Penny’s Reviews > Playing for Keeps > Status Update

If the author is going to make David crazy, he needs to be FUCKING crazy-like hogtie and kidnap crazy.

So, a controlling alpha isn’t insecure, they’re controlling because they want what they want and will protect it with every fiber of their being. Insecurity does not factor into that scenario. Jealousy, sure…stifling insecurity- no. David is so insecure, like a child. It’s not a good look

He played pro ball and admitted he made 30 mill a year for 8 years, models, and has a fragrance line, and wants to go back to playing ball cause he’s worried about running out of money? What?

Okay but then after the confession, she asks him to fuck her. What am I reading?

This book is trying so hard to be the crossfire series. Ava’s hesitation to reveal her secret is the same as Austin (that the H would be disgusted) and the reveal didn’t shock me and I think if you’re sleeping with someone you think may be disgusted by the fact that you were raped as a child, then you shouldn’t be loving them.

“I had pretended to be put together, controlled. Perfect.”

Did I miss a prequel or something? Not once has Austin acted like a perfectionist.

I swear to god, if her big secret is dumb, I’m gonna lose it.

He treats her do well and she’s being a bitch. I can’t with this book. I’m so close to finishing but wanna dnf so bad.

Why does David like Austin aside from her body? I am confused.

I like smut and all but what makes smut great is a story, not more smut.