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To be YA this reads like MG. Most paragraphs are like two sentences, including dialogue, which is fun? But also it does irritate me when two paragraphs in a row start with the main character’s name (Kane), considering that the paragraphs are two sentences long.
— Aug 14, 2022 10:30PM

