Mary’s Reviews > Lost Under a Ladder > Status Update
Mary
is 45% done
Told from the MCs POV and it's too stream of consciousness. "Black cat. Feral? Bad luck?" Not my style. But I do like the overall story. Just not the details or the execution so far.
— Sep 09, 2022 03:16AM
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Mary
is 77% done
Timeline issue - went out for lunch, finished the meal and it's now late evening.
— Jun 22, 2014 11:13AM
Mary
is 45% done
Told from the MCs POV and it's too stream of consciousness. "Black cat. Feral? Bad luck?" Not my style. But I do like the overall story. Just not the details or the execution so far.
— Jun 22, 2014 09:53AM
