Status Update

Nina ( picturetalk321 ) is 33% done

DNF. The prose style is staccato. I could just about get uses to it if the world building and the characters were compelling. Alas, I didn't find them so and cared no jot about any of the people and could hardly tell some of them apart. My suspended belief crashed when the time travellers in mediaeval Languedoc had electricity and wifi. At 33% the 2 worlds had yet not met, the one interesting thing about time travel!

— Sep 12, 2022 01:47AM