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Hayli
Hayli is on page 110 of 192
Found a typo. Straight is written as straiht.
Sep 13, 2022 04:00PM
After: The Graphic Novel Volume One

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Hayli
Hayli is on page 163 of 192
Another typo. “You went through phone, Hardin, DIDN’T YOU?” Also, these unnecessary bolded words throws me off so much. I don’t think every bubble needs that much emphasis on what they’re saying.
Sep 13, 2022 04:23PM
After: The Graphic Novel Volume One


Hayli
Hayli is on page 154 of 192
This dude has issues. The love interests went to dinner with one of their parents family and Hardin stormed away from the table TWICE. This man is the king of flying off the handle.
Sep 13, 2022 04:18PM
After: The Graphic Novel Volume One


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