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Karla Slusher
is 51% done
.......I do not even know where to start.... The writing is choppy and it has plenty of errors.... and OMG I can NOT stand the whole God and Day thing... it is very I don't even know, I just don't like the names, or their first names for that matter. The whole names thing is bugging me. The sex is hot, very hot - but They went from 0-100 in 2 pages, there was no slow burn, no nothing, just BAM!.
— Nov 27, 2014 06:45PM
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Karla Slusher
is 51% done
I don't like the whole deal with god's family either, it is very... VERY sketchy as far as storyline goes. I do like the premise of 2 cop partners who get it on, but the execution so far is meh... I am going to keep reading for now, purely for the sex.
— Nov 27, 2014 06:47PM
