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Alice
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I find the pacing of this book quite odd, and I've been trying to put my finger on the issue. It feels like each time I get sucked into the action, the scene/chapter ends, only to start a new one with a block of description that kills the pacing.
— Sep 23, 2022 01:53PM
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Alice
is on page 98 of 400
I wish I could blow through this book but I'm finding it bogged down by too much telling of random information about the world or about Jamie's life. It's a lot of detail that feels like it could be summed up more quickly, or cut entirely.
— Sep 22, 2022 03:08PM
