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Natalie
is 69% done
Getting better. Much more character depth and cohesive story telling. Don’t understand his love for his partner though. If I dnf right now would give it a 2.5 rating. Up from 1 star when I first updated.
— Sep 23, 2022 05:26PM
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Natalie
is 52% done
Re- read some of the reviews. Decided to give it another shot and keep going. Better but still shallow.
— Sep 23, 2022 04:45PM
Natalie
is 26% done
DNF @ 26%. Too shallow and superficial, with no character connection.
— Sep 23, 2022 03:41PM
