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Diamond Drake
is 62% done
I liked the love scene between Rafe and and Erin but I just did NOT get their pillow talk! That was the oddest time to talk about his dad! There just seems to be a lot of clumsy dialogue and overstating thoughts and feelings.
— Dec 02, 2014 01:45PM
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Diamond Drake
is 40% done
REALLY?! How old are these characters? Some of the "secrets" and issues are so juvenile that I can't imagine a person being THAT mad for THAT long. And some of these information dumps come at the oddest times. Stealing hotdog buns? Really? And THAT'S the moment to bring it up? I may give it another chapter but I don't know if this is for me.
— Dec 01, 2014 06:53PM
Diamond Drake
is 33% done
These conversations are starting to sound like infomercials . . . forced and phony.
— Dec 01, 2014 06:03PM
Diamond Drake
is 20% done
What's Erin's fascination with this particular detective? She seems kind of fixated on him.
— Nov 23, 2014 08:50PM
