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1) Prologue too long, uneventlful and too detached
2) Misuse of the word 'nonplussed'
3) Sara's appearance described as she looked at herself in a mirror
Also, why does she think passing her course will make the difference between Hollywood or Kindergarten?
— Oct 07, 2022 05:12AM
1) Prologue too long, uneventlful and too detached
2) Misuse of the word 'nonplussed'
3) Sara's appearance described as she looked at herself in a mirror
Also, why does she think passing her course will make the difference between Hollywood or Kindergarten?
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Oct 07, 2022 05:15AM
Also, it's little wonder she can only afford a lemon of a car if she's a student spending her money on one-to-one psychotherapy.
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