Diamond Drake’s Reviews > Benevolent > Status Update

I hope like hell this isn't gonna be a cliche--I have someone for you to meet--ending. Please don't let it be that.

I knew it . . . which isn't saying much since you could see that one coming from a mile away. I'm ready for this one to be done.

So is Janette who Eden came to meet?

Things have gotten repetitive again. Why can't we as the reader just be told that Dane filled Janette in on everything that happened? Why is ALL of it being repeated? And a good proofing is definitely in order . . . so many missing words or wrong words that it's gotten quite annoying.

I REALLY hope Dane isn't about to do what I think he's about to do.

Oooooh, I KNEW it! I bet Dane won't be confused now!

I've got this nagging, distrustful feeling about Gabi. I don't know what it is but she strikes me as the victim type that would do almost anything to keep Dane . . . even lie. I don't trust her but it could be because I'm tired of her at this point. I don't know, though. Something just doesn't seem right about her "tragic" life.

The story is fairly interesting but I HATE Dane's repetitive thoughts! He spends paragraphs thinking the same damn thing.

I can empathize with Dane but he keeps putting himself in tempting situations that will only lead to trouble. The--I want my cake and eat it too--type of trouble.

Dane's repetitive thoughts are getting on my nerves! Move on already, geez!