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Currently finished the sample. Ben is such an edgelord sigma male that it's hard to take him seriously in some lines. But that's probably the point, characterization is on point so far!
— Oct 13, 2022 02:54PM
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Erin
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Interesting father/son relationship. Feels tumultuous! Definitely informed Ben’s view on the world. He falls into “affection” easily. I think it’s more of a “I want that girl because she’s pretty or because I know her”, which isn’t really great. Pretty sure that’s why he gets rejected all the time…!
— Oct 14, 2022 07:39PM
