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DNF @38%.
Just couldn't get past the narrative voices, they all sounded a bit adult for their ages and it felt like there was a lot of male fantasy projection into some of the characters and just how things happened. I also think that it could have done with a bit more trimming as far as editing goes.
— Oct 16, 2022 02:16PM
Just couldn't get past the narrative voices, they all sounded a bit adult for their ages and it felt like there was a lot of male fantasy projection into some of the characters and just how things happened. I also think that it could have done with a bit more trimming as far as editing goes.
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