Astratow’s Reviews > Capital > Status Update
Astratow
is on page 146 of 577
Pakistani in Chechnya, Polish builder is also shareholder, now Zimbabwean girl thrown out of the country... Ridiculousness has no end. But writing style is good.
— Dec 18, 2014 03:15PM
Like flag
Astratow’s Previous Updates
Astratow
is on page 529 of 577
Langauge is still far from brilliant but some issues are important. Haven't seen more Tomascewski, he is Zbigniew alias Bogdan now.
— Dec 25, 2014 04:19PM
Astratow
is on page 60 of 577
Polish builder, whose name is Bogdan (relating to English Bob?) but really Zbigniew Tomascewski!? There is no such a surname in Polish, and character is ridiculous: he is collecting money to help out the firm his dad has. He does thousand of pounds, but he lives in shared accomodation and shared room as well. His major issue with his roommate is snorring... Ecuse me, there is always more important stuff than that.
— Dec 17, 2014 09:18PM
Astratow
is on page 32 of 577
it goes slow. Large narrator parts with hardly any dialog. Author tries to make it as non fiction, historical thing and then comes back to fiction bit. Will that survive?
— Dec 16, 2014 02:18PM
