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This is total and complete utter fucking pain.
The first sentence is a practically unreadable mess, as is nearly every sentence in this book.
It's run along sentence, followed by run along sentence. I seriously wonder if the author know s that periods exist, cause these sentences go on forever.
Moreover, this book is written and described not from first, second, or third person, but the author's perspective... why
— Oct 21, 2022 03:45PM
The first sentence is a practically unreadable mess, as is nearly every sentence in this book.
It's run along sentence, followed by run along sentence. I seriously wonder if the author know s that periods exist, cause these sentences go on forever.
Moreover, this book is written and described not from first, second, or third person, but the author's perspective... why
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