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Sarah
is 12% done
The writing on this is so bad. So many errors. Some things are meant to be funny and they’re just not. Fat phobic joke. Incompetent heroine. Going to DNF it here.
— Oct 24, 2022 10:34PM
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Sarah
is 9% done
Seriously needs an editor. So many sentences that have improperly used commas, need semicolons instead, or just straight up need to be divided up.
— Jul 17, 2022 08:21PM
