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I hate this obligation to insert unnecessary conflict in the 3rd act that is this trite Western model. And this book is supposed to be no/low angst.
— Oct 31, 2022 08:26PM
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Oct 31, 2022 08:54PM
Oh, I read this one. I need to review. Yeah the 3rd act break up was so patently genre driven and not really plot necessary.
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Tina wrote: "Oh, I read this one. I need to review. Yeah the 3rd act break up was so patently genre driven and not really plot necessary."Yup, unnecessary and nonsensical. It really just comes out of nowhere. There’s enough external conflict. I’ll look for your review when you write it. See if we felt similarly by the time I’m done.
