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Intro was good but succeeding pages are slowing down despite being action-packed. Hoping for a faster pace and better verbs hehe.
— Dec 26, 2014 07:37AM
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Decided to stop forcing myself to read this convoluted story. Can't help compare with Dan Brown's style sans the characterization and fluid words. I hope when I get to a more generous mood to return to this story, I'll have a better (and happier) review.
— Jan 01, 2015 06:08PM

