naomi’s Reviews > The Dolphin > Status Update

naomi
naomi is on page 53 of 78
“Your midnight taxi meets the midnight rain.”
Ugh👩‍🍳💋
Nov 10, 2022 10:25AM
The Dolphin

flag

naomi’s Previous Updates

naomi
naomi is on page 66 of 78
Nov 10, 2022 10:00PM
The Dolphin


naomi
naomi is on page 57 of 78
“I feel tomorrow how I feel today in this gold lull of sleep… the muzzled lover lies open, takes on the world for what it is, a minute more than a minute…”

My gosh…
Nov 10, 2022 08:28PM
The Dolphin


naomi
naomi is on page 55 of 78
“…preferring to have your body broken to being unbreakable in this breaking life.”
Nov 10, 2022 10:30AM
The Dolphin


naomi
naomi is on page 44 of 78
“A hundred mornings greet the same closed sky.” Goodness…
Nov 10, 2022 10:00AM
The Dolphin


naomi
naomi is on page 35 of 78
I actually like a few of these. What jumps out to be more are single lines rather than the entirety of the poem. I frankly cannot really grasp what he’s trying to say as a whole but with a line that sticks out to me or strikes me as something relatable, makes up for the fact that the poem itself connected, I cannot really understand it’s real meaning. Maybe I do just in my own way…
Nov 10, 2022 08:02AM
The Dolphin


naomi
naomi is on page 18 of 78
So far it’s going right over my head
Nov 09, 2022 02:08PM
The Dolphin


No comments have been added yet.