Status Update

Nikki Sanchez-Love is 80% done

Every word makes me wish I had no eyes. The school shooting scene is used as a power fantasy for the self insert. The love interest is treated like an object that ‘James’ ‘obtains’ at the start of the book. Giving no actual driving force in the plot. Grammar and spelling are awful. Some lines read as if the author got hit in the head with the keyboard while writing. The last 20% will probably finish me off.

— Nov 14, 2022 05:25AM