Melissa Noël’s Reviews > The Athena Effect > Status Update

Oh look, that supernatural plot thingy has returned! I think we went about 200 words without Calvin fantasizing about shoving his tongue down Caledonia's throat!

I hate Calvin more than all of the abusive love interests put together. Edward was less infuriating!

Slowly getting to the end. Maybe one of these months, eh?

Gag me with a rusty spoon, this is getting worse! I hate this manwhore fucker! He's always "amused" by Caledonia's naivety. Fuck you! And now they're kissing and bullshit like that!

Halfway point! :D

If she can use her emotion-colour power on people, why hasn't she used it on Phil? If I were her I'd manipulate his emotions to kill himself. Asshole deserves it!

“The thought of never seeing her again filled him with dread. He vowed right then to do whatever it took, deciding he had to figure out a way to make her want to stay.”

GRAAAAAAAAAAGHGHGHGHGHH!!!! SHE DOESN'T FEEL SAFE STAYING IN A TOXIC ENVIRONMENT AT HER AUNT'S PLACE AND ALL YOU CAN THINK ABOUT IS GUILTING HER INTO STAYING TO SATISFY YOURSELF? IF YOU CARED ABOUT HER YOU WOULDN'T STOP HER FROM LEAVING!

“He almost wished that he was the one with the cut, just so he could feel the gentleness of her touch once more.”

SERIOUSLY? How pathetic are you? Your brother cut his fucking finger open!

He keeps comparing her to his past conquests! I'm telling you, he's only intrigued by her because she's not "easy" like the faceless, cardboard cut-outs that he's fucked in the past! Calvin's a disgusting human being and I wish that Caledonia would see that already!

He knows that she wouldn't dare spend money at that stupid fair so he says it's on him. He also thinks that she's an "enigma", aka a Manic Pixie Dream Girl. I hate him; any guy that likes a girl just because she's "mysterious" and "not like other girls" is a moron. *sigh* It's inevitable that these two will get together because Caledonia doesn't interact with other people her age and Calvin sees her as a challenge.