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경훈 (庚勳)
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This guy really just spend an entire page explaining to the reader how paiute deadfalls work...
— Nov 22, 2022 04:34AM
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경훈 (庚勳)
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What he needed was a bow and spindle—a crude machine for making fire. (lengthy unnecessary explanation of how a bowdrill works)
It’s like this guy spent a couple hours watching survival videos and is forcing everything he learned into this book without ever having applied any of it. He expects the reader to believe a guy with only one working arm was able to start a fire this way on his first ever try?
— Nov 22, 2022 04:49AM
It’s like this guy spent a couple hours watching survival videos and is forcing everything he learned into this book without ever having applied any of it. He expects the reader to believe a guy with only one working arm was able to start a fire this way on his first ever try?
경훈 (庚勳)
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”You’re wasting time if you’re not asleep already. Now, who’s taking first watch?” No one stepped forward.
One of my biggest pet peeves is when characters act like the first watch is so hard. It’s literally the best shift next to the last shift. Even more annoying when the protagonist tries to be all noble by loudly telling everyone he’s taking the first watch as if he’s helping anyone 😒
— Nov 21, 2022 02:01PM
One of my biggest pet peeves is when characters act like the first watch is so hard. It’s literally the best shift next to the last shift. Even more annoying when the protagonist tries to be all noble by loudly telling everyone he’s taking the first watch as if he’s helping anyone 😒