Mohsin’s Reviews > The First Binding > Status Update
Mohsin
is 77% done
Oh dear. This is, just…juvenile. The world-building is quite good, but the characterization is absolutely terrible, with characters so flat and lacking in chemistry (either alone or with each other) that there are post-it notes that are more compelling in their own right. It’s good plot & pacing, but the overwrought, angsty dialogues, and childish “emotions, my gAWd, how powerful mah FEELZ are just horrible.
— Nov 22, 2022 11:44AM
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