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Tabetha
is 16% done
The color of the characters eyes are mentioned almost every page.
— Jan 05, 2015 09:31AM
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Tabetha
is 10% done
1st chapter was good kept me intrigued. My biggest issue right now is Colton' s pov. The way him and his friend are acting and talking does not make it believable that they are 21, more like 16. Guys don't express their feelings the way Colton is or give "sad eyes" to each other.
— Jan 05, 2015 07:23AM
