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is 43% done
"Looking at the clock on the wall, three hours had passed since she first arrived and the more impatient she became the harder it was to retrieve her anger."
Not sure what word was supposed to be used instead of "retrieve" since she was pretty angry...
— Jan 05, 2015 12:26PM
Not sure what word was supposed to be used instead of "retrieve" since she was pretty angry...
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Cheri
is 23% done
Honestly this book is terrible so far. I hope it gets better but I can't see much hope in that.
It reads like a first draft - undeveloped characters, so many typos, misused words, missing words, added words, and cliches that it's not even funny.
— Jan 03, 2015 03:24PM
It reads like a first draft - undeveloped characters, so many typos, misused words, missing words, added words, and cliches that it's not even funny.
