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Brayla
Brayla is on page 267 of 432
I feel like the romance building is subpar. Forna gives little to nothing to the reader about Keita and Deka’s forming relationship other than the small scenes of them at that tree. They don’t interact anywhere else outside of that and the battlefield to allow for a crush to form and prosper
Dec 04, 2022 10:44PM
The Gilded Ones (Deathless, #1)

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Brayla
Brayla is on page 257 of 432
The book so far is great. However, I feel like there are a lot of tiny details that some readers may forget about as the book goes on and they just might end up being really important.
Dec 04, 2022 08:30PM
The Gilded Ones (Deathless, #1)


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