Blue’s Reviews > Dark Rise > Status Update

What I dislike about this book is how it keeps repeating its phrases.
A character will say something and Will will think it again for some reason, it becomes very tiring,

Another thing is that the "enemy" is made out to be so much stronger and badder. I get that the author is going for the underdog narrative but it is so inflated that it takes me out of the narrative, I don't feel immersed at all