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Cheryl
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Liking book but I'm having trouble with how detailed the author gets at times. It's so ridiculous that it pulls me out of the story to think "Why???" Example - “He leaned back and stretched, the reclining desk chair supporting his weight, then scrubbed his hands through his hair. Why wouldn't the desk chair support his weight? Does he have crappy furniture? Does he have a weight issue? "
— Jan 12, 2015 12:40AM
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Cheryl
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Example #2 (bad guys getting away) "Tires squealing, the car sped down the one-way street, ignored the stop sign, and careened around the corner" Hmmmm, again just why?!? Why would a getaway car/driver STOP for a stop sign? We need to know he was trying to get away so quickly that he actually blew threw a stop sign.....the horror!
— Jan 12, 2015 12:42AM
