Dee’s Reviews > A Domme for Christmas > Status Update

So utterly disappointed in this story, and that's on me. I went in expecting an erotic story with some hot femdom AND a plot (what a bonus) and got quite something else.

He felt the cold gel as Holly worked her fingers into his boi-pussy.

Nooooo, just no. Call it what it is! Men do not have boi-pussies. How insulting to even compare the two, lol.

Tessa let him give her one orgasm without instruction because she needed to get off. Then she directed him. By the third time, her hands were entwined in his hair, moving him the way she needed.

^^ Isn't the above just vanilla sex? The D/s involved?

Finally some sex, but sadly, it went to a place that bugs the shit out of me. Making a guy have his dick sucked by a dude (without no prior discussion or negotiation) is not the ultimate form of domination - in my humble opinion.