Nerine Dorman’s Reviews > Garden of Dreams > Status Update
Nerine Dorman
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Not a bad story so far. Am feeling a bit distant from the characters and Eli's voice feels a bit too mature for his age. Will see how this goes.
— Jan 14, 2015 10:02PM
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Nerine Dorman
is on page 101
Still feeling a high degree of disconnect from the characters but the story is beginning to get far more interesting now.
— Jan 18, 2015 09:50PM
