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is 68% done
Trying to put my finger on what I don’t like
* Is it the alpha asshole
* The whiny heroine
* The horrible way the inexperienced heroine was treated during her first anal experience (which was dubious consent) and lack of aftercare
* The harping on minor details while large chunks of story are brushed over (they’ve gone back how many times to the lab that are just skipped over)
It’s a push to finish
— Dec 27, 2022 10:45PM
* Is it the alpha asshole
* The whiny heroine
* The horrible way the inexperienced heroine was treated during her first anal experience (which was dubious consent) and lack of aftercare
* The harping on minor details while large chunks of story are brushed over (they’ve gone back how many times to the lab that are just skipped over)
It’s a push to finish
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