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The Denise/Brian/Robin plot is a bit dull. I did enjoy the brief passage on the fruitless pursuit of inspiration from Central European cuisines and landscapes though.
Jan 04, 2023 07:39AM
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Eduardo Mendonça
Eduardo Mendonça is on page 326 of 568
I'm annoyed at the occasional gratuitous asides that seem to have no point other than to make a character seem more unlikeable -- Enid dumber, Gary pettier, Alfred meaner. They feel unearned.
Also the random ridiculous minor characters feel very out of place in a "serious" novel with "realistic" characters?!
Jan 03, 2023 09:50AM
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