Hugo’s Reviews > Celestial > Status Update

This book feels like a missed opportunity. It has some pretty bad writing in it. Like… “Long moony hops carrying them forward.” What…?! There are also lots of mistakes, like starts of sentences that haven’t been capitalised and bits of dialogue missing speech marks, which makes me wonder if it was properly proofread. Cool concept but not great writing sadly…

Feels both overwritten and not very well edited