Kim’s Reviews > Heart of Steel > Status Update
Kim
is 35% done
So far he asked her a question and I've read three pages of descriptions and internal dialogue and she still hasn't answered him
— Jan 22, 2015 03:11PM
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Kim
is 52% done
She once again doesn't say something because she just can't find the words.
— Jan 22, 2015 04:03PM
Kim
is 50% done
Once again he asks her a question. 4 pages of descriptions and internal dialogue and she never answered. Now I'm reading about the next day.
— Jan 22, 2015 03:56PM
Kim
is 44% done
I hate when an author has a character not open there mouth to say something because of there conflicting emotions or they didn't know what to say or they are to overcome to speak. Such a cop out to add page filler.
— Jan 22, 2015 03:39PM
