Caroline Little’s Reviews > Birthday Girl > Status Update

The angst is good. “should we want to, but we can’t. It’s wrong we shouldn’t” that’s all awesome. But the amount of unnecessary detail in this book is obscene. it loses at least one star for me because of that. I don’t need to know that Dutches’s koozie says I pee in pools. What does that have to do with the story? nothing. The book is 80% unecessary detail. So that looses another star for me.