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kimberly_rose is 99% done
Amazing idea and fantastic twist but showing the same scenes twice over from two povs was incredibly, incredibly annoying. I know the author was using it as a technique to show the disparities of view, but it resulted in
a stunted narrative.
Jan 05, 2023 05:04PM
The Pursuit of Ordinary

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