Melissa Chung’s Reviews > Come Little Children > Status Update

"As her eyes began to close, there was a little twinkle...Camilla looked up-blinking-and saw the little twinkle again..."

I had to read this twice to see twinkle and not twinkie!!! buahhahah I must be hungry.

Over use of a single word drives me crazy. There are other words to use besides oily! Slick, or filmy, or watery. UGH!

She is so stupid. I hate when people take matters into their own hands. Ohhhh what is going to happen now?

"It was a marinade of forgotten chattels, like the mustiness of a nostalgia shop or the staleness of a secondhand bookstore."

Woohoo pretty good start for today :D

"...her mouth was peeled back in a look of sad desperation, as if in her final moments she had pleaded with Death for a couple more days, or at least one more cigarette."

"Peter and Camilla tromped over the living room carpet, following a trail of ashtrays like a carcinogenic breadcrumbs..."

Nice!

agog (adj)- very eager or curious to hear or see something.

"It actually felt desaturated, as if everything but grey had been hosed down the drain in the center of the room's floor."