Elithanathile’s Reviews > Aiden's Luck > Status Update
Elithanathile
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// The author can’t go based on how she would react or feel, she has to be 100% logical and discerning when plotting a character, because she may push Aiden’s personality to the point where he is so incredibly obnoxious, aggravating, irritating, and fucking unlikable, that he’ll end up just being completely irredeemable! She’ll end up completely obliterating, decimating, destroying, and sabotaging the book!!!
— Jan 07, 2023 03:00PM
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Elithanathile
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// This author really needs to fucking be careful, because while she has a plan with this plot, she can push way too far, and bring Aiden to the point where he’s completely irredeemable!!
— Jan 07, 2023 02:59PM
Elithanathile
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// Reading this a second time around, I’m dumbfounded at how I didn’t see Aiden as so incredibly fucking obnoxious, irritating, aggravating, ignorant, judgmental, so fucking full of himself, and obnoxiously dismissive of everyone around him!!
— Jan 07, 2023 02:56PM
Elithanathile
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// Aiden is such a fucking judgemental piece of shit, I really wanna hit him and slap him hard 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡!!!
— Jan 07, 2023 03:33AM
Elithanathile
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// So, because you specifically are incapable of helping her, you were unwilling to find her help elsewhere, from people who could help her aside from you?! That logic does not actually make any logical sense, and you’re a fucking idiot for ever thinking that way!!
— Jan 06, 2023 11:17PM
Elithanathile
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// Wow, Aiden is coming across as incredibly unlikeable so far … also so far up his own ass and lying to himself about being able to handle everything and refusing to accept help!!!
— Jan 06, 2023 11:09PM
Elithanathile
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// Wow, what the fuck is Aiden’s problem?! He hates anyone who is happy, it seems, and anybody who is trying to help him or be good to him or be kind to him!! I really wanna slap Aiden right now!!
— Jan 06, 2023 11:05PM
Elithanathile
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// Aiden, you pined after a man you knew you would never and could never have, and I am really thinking that that was, by way of an introduction to the person in his family, that you would find to be the absolute complete love of your life!! This moment still hits quite profoundly, so beautiful!!
— Jan 06, 2023 10:27PM
