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Jonathan
Jonathan is 79% done
Fairly good pacing kept a proper amount of tension. The story felt empty to me though, some shadow monster chased her, so what? She was a nameless character, the only motivation in the story was fear.

I do find myself wondering what city this was in, it sounds busier that NYC for instance...

I'll give this one a 3/5
Jan 07, 2023 05:12PM
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 98% done
This last story was really good. The end could have been presented better, but I still really liked it.
I just wish the rest of the book had been half as good. 4/5
Jan 07, 2023 05:41PM
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 89% done
I'm really liking this story. Very interesting how everyone agrees something is wrong and how upset the mother is. In fact that is why I'm updating this now... I think the mother knows shes dead because she killed her. It would explain pretty much everything. We shall see.
Jan 07, 2023 05:29PM
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 75% done
The premise of this story is very clever. Unfortunately the delivery was poor. I feel I'm being generous rating it 2/5
Jan 06, 2023 06:06PM
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 70% done
A very familiar premise with a completely predictable outcome. It was well presented at least so I'll give it a 3/5 rating
Jan 05, 2023 07:02PM
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 59% done
I wanted to like this one, it was actually fairly promising... I never made it to the 4 star range, a bit long and a weak ending. 3/5
Jan 04, 2023 06:17PM
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 45% done
Didn't like this one at all. 2/5
Jan 04, 2023 05:58PM
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 40% done
A very familiar plot, but it was also well presented. This is the first story in the book I truly liked. 4/5
Jan 04, 2023 05:53PM
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 32% done
Anglerfish meets the Thing. Thos story didn't really work for me. 2/5
That being said, if I had to rate the book as a whole right now I'd give it a 3/5
Jan 03, 2023 07:00PM
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 22% done
I'm going to agree with the little brother, the wolf is really cool, and a handmade gift from grandpa is something to treasure. Of course the fact it seems to be possessed and the music is horrible is problematic but still!

At least that was my first impression. It kind of feels like the author just started a story, slapped a half hearted ending on it and gave up.... 2/5
Jan 03, 2023 06:01PM
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Jonathan
Jonathan is 13% done
Not sure how I feel about the first story. First off I have no idea how he feel hard enough to broke his collarbone... perhaps the window was higher than I thought. Secondly I'm not sure what's going on. Is he in a loop untill he gets it right? Or was the old man just unclear? 3/5
Jan 03, 2023 05:48PM
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