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Lisa
Lisa is 40% done
Giving up. The writing is just too awful, even if the storyline is interesting. Stilted dialogue. Ham-fisted exposition. And, I have a hard time suspending my disbelief because the writer glosses over details as if they don't matter. I can't keep my head in the story because every other sentence is so poorly written it kicks me back out.
Jan 10, 2023 04:42AM
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