DarkChaplain’s Reviews > Briardark > Status Update
DarkChaplain
is 50% done
Really struggling with this one, which is why it was on ice for a while. But coming back to it, it fell right back into the repetitive loop of "protagonist does something stupid, regrets it, then does more stupid". The characters around her are finally starting to wake up to it, but so far it's been a lot of shouting-at-page content, as the main character consistently makes bad decisions, which isn't horror.
— Jan 10, 2023 01:21PM
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