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also i just thought of this: ali's first sex scenes are always hella weird
like in tlh: after sexual harassment, i think the love on the brain was weird too and now stuck with you, she was really insecure (like in tlh) like why can't she write a confident woman, who eats normal food not snacks (tlh: olive only drinks coffee; under one roof: snacks all throughout the day??????????)
— Jan 12, 2023 01:49PM
like in tlh: after sexual harassment, i think the love on the brain was weird too and now stuck with you, she was really insecure (like in tlh) like why can't she write a confident woman, who eats normal food not snacks (tlh: olive only drinks coffee; under one roof: snacks all throughout the day??????????)
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kris
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finished stuck with you and.... 1/5..
nowwww what did ali think when she decided to publish this..
''It is so bad, I want to give you a zero, but that's not possible, so I give you a one''
- literally no pining AT ALL so borrinnnngg
- pretty much nonexistent character development, i may even have disliked sadie...
- i liked erik's obsession w/ sadie + bonus points for kinkiness
BUT
- smut was so baddddd and awkward
— Jan 12, 2023 11:38AM
nowwww what did ali think when she decided to publish this..
''It is so bad, I want to give you a zero, but that's not possible, so I give you a one''
- literally no pining AT ALL so borrinnnngg
- pretty much nonexistent character development, i may even have disliked sadie...
- i liked erik's obsession w/ sadie + bonus points for kinkiness
BUT
- smut was so baddddd and awkward
kris
is on page 122 of 371
finished under one roof :
3/5
- love guy
- no hate between them whatsoever
- but cute
- nah yall why tf ali is trying to act sustainable and anti-capitalist when babe- 😀 garnier? like uhuh do your research
- also sorry but wtf liam working at big oil cannot be justified by “my mentor is my boss” nah yall and he is AGAINST BIG OIL??? = makes no fucking sense
- wtf was that epilogue
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— Jan 11, 2023 11:12AM
3/5
- love guy
- no hate between them whatsoever
- but cute
- nah yall why tf ali is trying to act sustainable and anti-capitalist when babe- 😀 garnier? like uhuh do your research
- also sorry but wtf liam working at big oil cannot be justified by “my mentor is my boss” nah yall and he is AGAINST BIG OIL??? = makes no fucking sense
- wtf was that epilogue
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