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" I used to think I wanted to be a part of your world. But you just made me realize how wrong I was.”

This lasted exactly one day. Apparently being kidnapped and locked up really made her appreciate the Fae world...
Why do people have no consistency in who they are and what they believe here?
Jan 12, 2023 03:57PM
Winter of the Shadow Fae (Land of the Fae, #1)

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"I barely knew Angelina and Zoe, but they were good women."

How do you know that, if you barely know them???
Jan 12, 2023 05:55PM
Winter of the Shadow Fae (Land of the Fae, #1)


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"My mother taught me the elvish language when I was a kid.”"

Why? Why is that a thing? It makes no sense for the worldbuilding at all, since the elves and fae aren't even that close.
Jan 12, 2023 05:53PM
Winter of the Shadow Fae (Land of the Fae, #1)


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" I wanted to hear his torment.

Once the fire decimated his legs, I watched it cover his abdomen. The more he screamed, the more I enjoyed it. I knew I shouldn’t, but it felt good. "

They're all awful people.
Jan 12, 2023 05:21PM
Winter of the Shadow Fae (Land of the Fae, #1)


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"but guns could severely damage my kind. Even just a knick with an iron bullet could kill us."

Yes, I've read this phrase about four times already.
Jan 12, 2023 05:00PM
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"I kept hoping, with time, the urge to hurt me because of his father’s revenge would dissipate, but it was still there and there were no signs of it weakening. "

It's been a WEEK. Of course it's not going to disappear that soon, or it would have been gone waaaay sooner.
Jan 12, 2023 04:59PM
Winter of the Shadow Fae (Land of the Fae, #1)


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"I’m glad she decided to go away, especially with everything going on.”"

You were extremely angry about it. Then never thought about it again. So how exactly are you glad now? Oh right, redemption. It's the "good" in you that just comes out randomly because it's necessary for the plot.
Jan 12, 2023 04:48PM
Winter of the Shadow Fae (Land of the Fae, #1)


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" “I did, but I also watched you confront him. I know you had nothing to do with killing Alette.”

“How? I should’ve been able to feel you.”"


And it should have been mentioned at the very least...
Jan 12, 2023 04:42PM
Winter of the Shadow Fae (Land of the Fae, #1)


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"It had to have been Ridge who killed Alette."

A yes, your single day of observation has given you such a good idea of who they are you know exactly which one of these boys you don't know did something...
Jan 12, 2023 04:29PM
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"but I owe you my life."

ah yes, being kidnapped but not killed means you now owe your kidnapper... It was only one night, so way too soon for Stockholm's
Jan 12, 2023 04:06PM
Winter of the Shadow Fae (Land of the Fae, #1)


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"a punishing welcome."

that feels rather... contradictionary.
Jan 12, 2023 04:01PM
Winter of the Shadow Fae (Land of the Fae, #1)


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