Shadow Jubilee’s Reviews > Caged > Status Update

All right. Lucca's lost me the moment he yelled at Christian that he was unfixable.

You know what floored me? The fact that Lucca is apparently a Dom and was training to be one by Carl, and yet we see him responding as a submissive as well as this additional detail at 74% in his cabin where he trained as a sub.

Gah. Talk, talk, talk, no show.

Err, Paul, Lucca never mentioned Carl's name. So how the heck do you know it?

Sebastian is 23? He sounded like a child. Ugh.

Ugh. It's so sickly sweet. I'm seeing pink, fluffy, and cotton-candy everywhere. Bleurgh.

Oh, disappointing. Sex was fast and unsexy, the sex talk a little ridiculous and unnatural, and the writing inelegant. *sigh*

What? The beginning of the first chapter is not a dream? Geez, Christian sounds far younger than "almost 21" that quite honestly, I thought Lucca was having sex with an adolescent. It's a little uncomfortable.