Heart DeCoupeville’s Reviews > Mishaps and Murder: A Coffee Shop Cozy Mystery > Status Update
Heart DeCoupeville
is on page 18 of 175
I'm trying, really trying, but it's difficult. What kind of "community" is this? A town? A city? Big enough to have a Sheriff [sic] with 3 deputies? Taxing authority to pay 'em? Hardly a "cozy" mystery; more like a goofy, nonsensical one. And how does anyone even know this death was a murder yet? No autopsy? No nothing? This is . . . dumb. Help!
— Jan 14, 2023 06:25PM
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Heart DeCoupeville
is on page 43 of 175
This book get stupider and stupider the more I read. I think it's destroying my brain cells.
— Jan 14, 2023 11:03PM
Heart DeCoupeville
is on page 21 of 175
I've read the first 3 chapters three times. None of what I've read makes sense. Setting is in the morning, after 7 a.m. People in coffee shop, long enough for three cups. Body found at 7 a.m. but no one knows about it? Person who found body just walks in and announces it, but after notifying Sheriff? I'm really trying to like this, or at least keep reading, but it's making no sense whatsoever.
— Jan 14, 2023 07:31PM
Heart DeCoupeville
is on page 13 of 175
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I guess good writing no longer counts. As in properly attributing dialogue. I want to read this book, not just skim for the basic story, which may or may not be any good. Half the time I have to read everything two or three times just to figure out who's talking because the speech tags are in the wrong place. And they're over-done. Why?????
— Jan 13, 2023 05:40PM
I guess good writing no longer counts. As in properly attributing dialogue. I want to read this book, not just skim for the basic story, which may or may not be any good. Half the time I have to read everything two or three times just to figure out who's talking because the speech tags are in the wrong place. And they're over-done. Why?????
