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wait? what? this book just jumps to conclusions.... one sentence: find a parking space the next: being seated. again: one sentence: talking covertly, no window goo the next: talking like there is goo but it bever said if it was put on...and before with the phone call. it needs better editing.
— Jan 31, 2015 12:22AM
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is on page 64 of 384
While I like this read and the MC her warring inner self is starting to sound, sadly and unoriginally, super familiar. One minute it's "I can't trust him/don't want to get him in trouble/I am woman hear me roar" and the next "I want his lips on me. Sorry. Not sorry".
— Jan 30, 2015 09:39PM
