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Nate Montez
is on page 66 of 259
A time that I could visualize what was happening in my head was when Yugi stepped on a mine and started getting shot at by a sniper. The author described the scenery well so that the reader could feel the suspense of the situation. Another time I could visualize the scene was when the soldiers went to the village to investigate. The author described the scene very well so we could feel what the soldiers were feeling.
— Jan 17, 2023 08:43AM
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Nate Montez
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The climax of my book was the battle at Husna and the young martyrs village. I think that this is the climax because it was when the main quest of the story was at the finish and also the part where the story begins to end. There were many parts of the book that were similar but that part of the story fits best as the climax.
— Feb 13, 2023 08:47AM
Nate Montez
is on page 218 of 259
I think that the inciting incident was when the main characters group stumbled upon a fight between the young martyrs and the people believed to be the bombers of their village. The reason I think that the inciting incident is because it starts the whole thing of finding out more about the young martyrs. It came a little later in the story than other books but that is what I think started up the main challenge.
— Feb 06, 2023 08:37AM
Nate Montez
is on page 179 of 259
My book is quest because the main character and her fellow soldiers are fighting towards the goal of discovering more about the young martyrs and also possibly stopping them too. The main character befriended a captured young martyr and is helping him find out about the people that bombed his village. In return, he is telling them information about the young martyrs. This is all for one goal of ending the taliban.
— Jan 31, 2023 08:57AM
Nate Montez
is on page 119 of 259
A supporting character in my book is Yugi and his friends. In this point of the book they only helped to develop the main character and bring more life to the soldiers. Another side character is McQueen who only helps to develop the story further and doesn't do much other than that. Yugi was a good influence to Nielson and his personality brought relief to the reader from the serious parts in the book.
— Jan 23, 2023 08:41AM
Nate Montez
is on page 16 of 259
This book reminds me of another book so I can make a connection with Text to Text. This book is about war so it reminded me about Bamboo People. They are both about soldiers in a war and the struggles of that. Torn is about the Afghanistan war and Bamboo People is about the war between the Burmese and the Karenni.
— Jan 10, 2023 08:47AM
