Tina’s Reviews > Jaylin's World > Status Update

I'm slightly annoyed by Ms. Hampton's new fondness for injecting her book titles into the dialogue. How many times must the reader be reminded that it's Jaylin's world? The entire naughty series takes place in his world. Scorpio continues to disappoint me by appearing to abbey being a living blow up doll.

I like Jaylin, sometimes. He doesn't pretend very hard to be a faithful and devoted husband. I detest Scorpio. I like Nokea on occasion. She knew who Jaylin was before she official dated him or married him so I'm unable to garner a lot of sympathy for her.