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Berishna
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VISUALIZE
I visualize many things while reading my book "The Do-Over". An example is on page 34, "Requel picked it up from the edge of the bed and watched the screen. A bouble appeared." This helps me visualize requel turning on her phone and being surprised to see a message from her dad.
— Jan 17, 2023 06:50PM
I visualize many things while reading my book "The Do-Over". An example is on page 34, "Requel picked it up from the edge of the bed and watched the screen. A bouble appeared." This helps me visualize requel turning on her phone and being surprised to see a message from her dad.
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Berishna
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7 STORY ARCHETYPES
My book's archetype is most likely A Quest. In "The Do-Over" the main characters( Lucinda and Raquel) try to complete a quest. Their quest was to try and bring their parents closer together. Along the way they face many obstacles like their dad's girlfriend and Juliette.
— Jan 31, 2023 05:13PM
My book's archetype is most likely A Quest. In "The Do-Over" the main characters( Lucinda and Raquel) try to complete a quest. Their quest was to try and bring their parents closer together. Along the way they face many obstacles like their dad's girlfriend and Juliette.
Berishna
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SUPPORTING CHARACTERS
One of the many supporting characters in my book "the Do Over" is Sylvia. Sylvia is Raquel's dad's girlfriend. she plays a distraction role in my book because she is in the way of Raquel's and Lu's plan to get their mom and dad back together again.
— Jan 23, 2023 04:02PM
One of the many supporting characters in my book "the Do Over" is Sylvia. Sylvia is Raquel's dad's girlfriend. she plays a distraction role in my book because she is in the way of Raquel's and Lu's plan to get their mom and dad back together again.
