Kat’s Reviews > Chasing Midnight > Status Update
Kat
is 30% done
This book is heavy on description, to the point of confusing the reader, it also jumps in the time frame of the book - progressing 3 months and then all of a sudden you are 3mths in the past at Chapter 7, again confusing the reader. The characters are interesting, unfortunately there are so many of them introduced its hard to keep track.
— Feb 02, 2015 06:04AM
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Kat
is 34% done
Oh dear... I someone swallowed a Thesaurus and an Anatomy dictionary - while trying to write a sex scene - 0-10 talk about ruining the mood! and why the heck would you use this as a sentence?(19%in) Syra detrained the table, again, - All aboard the 99 express to the twilight zone!
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Mhisery ENDUCED Quinn's shirt and loosened it from his jeans before her hands dissembled beneath the hem... #OMGReally?
— Feb 02, 2015 06:20AM
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Mhisery ENDUCED Quinn's shirt and loosened it from his jeans before her hands dissembled beneath the hem... #OMGReally?
